Sunday, August 7, 2011
What do you think of this Sonnet I attempted? Comments?
I'm no good at counting meter myself, I just know what sounds good to me and this sounds really good. My hubby and I are going on 10 years so I know exactly what you are talking about. You seem to have a great understanding of how the fire within a relationship will eventually die back, but continue to smolder but hopefully never completely burns out. And, how on occasion, the flames are stoked and we are reminded of the pion that still lives within us. Those who find this kind of "companionate love" are very lucky. Fabulous write.
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